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Hiragenna from ~25Nanao16's cool comic "North Heart" [link] This is not what he normally looks like. I thought it would be fun to do a fast-forward in time to see what Hiragenna could look like in the future. He has quite the fighting spirit, so I figured he'd probably have some battle scars.
Trade with This actually started out as just a test for a contest I am working on, but turned out into a full-blow work. As always, I know I need help getting better! So crits please ^^ Watercolor, colored pencil on bristol Hiragenna (c) ~25Nanao16 Photo reference: [link] by *woxys Comments
btw i dont have a premium membership but i still critique so u dont have to ask but u can.
Well its either the shoulders are to high or the neck is to low...X3. i know what u want it to look like but try to make it look more like there is a neck there.x3. i cant quite put my finger on it but it looks like theres something rong wit the muzzle/mouth. so take a tutorial on that to. ^.^. Everything else is absolutly wonderful tho. -- rawr..ಠ_ಠ Wolfie .......(\_/) ((.. _/{ "-; ~woof )).{{ ;'` ( ( ;._\\ |
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Critiques
Brillant use of water colours for the northern light lit skies, and trees! Amazing use of colours on the wolf its self, and a very natural pose (well done for finding a good ref
I also love the smug look on his face, he seems old here, yet very young in spirit!
Now for the crits:
The face, strikes me as being quite 'foxy', by that i mean thin and pointy (evan though in the ref, it looks very much like you've drawn it. I would have 'bulked' the muzzle out a tiny bit more)
Also, the rear leg dosen't seem quite right, again when useing a ref don't be afraid to move things about until they look right to you. Infact it's a good idea to leave a piece of work on your desk over night, then look at it the first thing when you wake up. Doing this you give yourself a rest, so when you return to it(be it just to look at it) you can give yourself an honest self crit.
that all being said, i love it, faved without question!
~more please!
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